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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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A Simple Plea

squeejay's picture

See what I see. I see a world falling around us. I see people lost and confused in the wake of a crumbling world. Morals and principle are on the verge of exstinction.
Hear what I here. I hear the sound of billions of voices crying out in the desparate struggle to find themselves. I hear the constant falling footsteps of lost souls as they wander into oblivion.
Feel what I feel. I feel the pain of the world as it dies. I feel the sorrow that sweeps like tides in the last hours of our lives. I feel the hope that once was strong, that has now faded into a great void.

Is it enough that we live our lives for ourselves only? For each and all, we are only part of a greater system. Humanity is the grid that connects the hearts of all individuals. It knows no boundaries, and knows no limits. It reaches across the infinity of time and space, connecting us all. But this web is only as strong as we make it. We often forget that we all have our parts to play in this world while we last. The time has come to build up our race, and to make ourselves more than individuals.

Usagi's picture

I like this,

I like this, Squeejay!
Very inspiring.

squeejay's picture

I am feeling a rare moment

I am feeling a rare moment of insight and inspiration at the moment... as if my head were uncluttered by the ceaseless tangents that arise in our day-to-day lives... oh there i go again....
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Just go with it.

Just go with it.

I got one of those earlier today. I started thinking about perfection, and how true perfection doesn't feel fake. Or perfection of the moment, anyway.

I had a way to say it much more eloquently but, sadly, I lost that state of mind when my brother started jumping about going on about Dungeons & Dragons.

sinisterVT's picture

ok i love ur poem/ plea..it

ok i love ur poem/ plea..it has inspired me to write one about it. hurray a spring board!

squeejay's picture

D & D, huh?

fun stuff.... but I prefer to live my own life like a dream...

simple and sweet...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Yeah. He loves it. He had

Yeah. He loves it. He had about five of his friends over for his birthday, and they played one big game for about four hours.

Sometimes my life is like a dream--weird enough to be, anyway. Except my dreams are really weird.

squeejay's picture

someday...

im gonna be a big philosopher guy... and live in a cheap apartment on a 10,000 a year salary, with people hurling their veggies at me...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

*Muffled laughter*

*Muffled laughter*

I can really picture that:

Squeejay plus long philosopher's beard, standing in the middle of the floor of an apartment dripping carrots...

squeejay's picture

dont forget...

the sack-cloth robe... while writing on a long scroll with a feather pen... half-moon spectacles... and maybe a cat beside me.... ill name him Leo...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

squeejay's picture

good book

anyone read "Flowers for Algernon"... a very sad, yet inspirational book.
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Sitting with

Sitting with your legs crossed and a rice bowl in front of you, trying to clap with one hand...

squeejay's picture

...

juggling chopsticks while attempting to write with the other...

man... what a life!
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

I'd like it, but it'd get

I'd like it, but it'd get kind of old after awhile.

Still...

Occupation: philosopher.

Hours: Enlightenment to Infinity, with occasional tea breaks.

squeejay's picture

hmmm

just thought of a great qwirp:

insult: get a life...

response: I have... where´s yours?

hahaha.... have you found your inner self yet?
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

squeejay's picture

sadness swarming....

tonight is my last night in Costa Rica.......

I fell in love with this place....

so sad to let it slip away so quickly...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Aww...same with me and

Aww...same with me and Thailand.

I went back twice and want to go again. I want to live there.

Go! Go out and enjoy it!

squeejay's picture

yah

I wanna "miss" the flight home... should be getting some sleep right now... but philosophical banter is so enjoyable...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Is Costa Rica

Is Costa Rica the same time zone as Vermont?

squeejay's picture

no...

one hour later... its 10:42 here... but I have got a long day of traveling ahead of me... and I just can´t fall asleep on planes for some reason...
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when life gives you lemons... order a root beer

Usagi's picture

Me neither. Flights to/from

Me neither. Flights to/from Japan are not fun if you can't sleep. And there was an awful red-eye one to Australia, the one and only time I've ever been airsick...

squeejay's picture

you went to Australia!?!?!?!

geeesh.... travel enough, rabbit girl??....
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Usagi's picture

No.

No. Never.

starmo93's picture

i love this poem. i wrote

i love this poem. i wrote something similar and it's so true. its really inspirational.

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