The City

I, myself, have been to the crystal city on the water.
I have stood on the glass balcony which reflected back below.
I have traveled endless miles into the sky which this place sits,
Where the shows are the thunderclouds far down where we row,
Above the clouds where storms cease to exist.
- Surgeo Church's blog
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Wonderful images...
I like the images of this and I like the way you repeat the first part of each sentence.
I'd encourage you to do several things.... I would take out "myself" in the first line.... AND, I would keep on writing. See where it takes you.
And with that idea, I can say, "Great start, S.C."
cheers
gg