Clouded Over

Where are you?
he said.
Sometimes, she
hides in her own little cloud
of thoughts and bubbles.
He wonders how she
can see.
Silly boy,
I have eyes.
he insisted
on a metaphorical
meaning.
oh.
in my own little cloud,
i'm always lost.
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Wow Soapy. I love this
Wow
Soapy.
I love this somewhat confusing aspect of this as you read it
And then the clarification towards the end.
Very cool!
(By the way, I poke you now...hehe...*poke*)
=D
heehee thank you.
i love you :]
Love you too dearest (and
Love you too dearest
(and thanks for being a YWP early bird with me )
:)
!!
EARLY BIRDS
*poke*
-write-
*breathe*
:]
Breathing is good, Keep
Breathing is good,
Keep doing it.