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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
Alternate: Splat! Use that word in a story or a poem.

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Separate

imagine's picture
Submitted by imagine on April 14, 2008 - 15:57.

I can tell that
sometimes when you
look at
me,
you see
her
in my
eyes.

(It scares me.)
Because,
you still don't
realize that
the two of us are

separate

beings.

The same color
hair
does not mean
we have the same color
minds.

awsmpossum's picture

Wow. The same

Submitted by awsmpossum on April 14, 2008 - 16:05.

Wow.
The same color
hair
does not mean
we have the same color
minds

I love that line.

ParisianTwist's picture

C: this is gorgeous... I

Submitted by ParisianTwist on April 14, 2008 - 16:07.

C:
this is gorgeous...
I only wish sometimes I could tell what you're
talking about.

Side-note: Only today did I realize your hair isn't half as dark as I thought it was.
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"Characters are only the pawns of Reality, and reality must begin somewhere." ~Self Quoted

awsmpossum's picture

Um Correct me If I'm

Submitted by awsmpossum on April 14, 2008 - 16:09.

Um
Correct me
If I'm wrong
But I think
It's about
You.

imagine's picture

Actually, it's not

Submitted by imagine on April 14, 2008 - 16:29.

Actually,
it's not about
Liz
at all...

I'll tell you later.
(Not on here.)

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