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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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Impossible

Anonymous's picture

All she wanted was to
weave her skin with his,
to tie their hair in
pretty bows and
suffocate in love as if
it were a
poison laced
with so much
beauty.

All she wanted was to
rip out his heart,
dripping with warmth and
sticky energy, and
squeeze it into the
cavity beneath her
ribs, next to her own,
where they would
beat and
live
together.

All she wanted was
to bottle that
love-struck emotion forever,
the one that she
sometimes saw dancing
between the veins
in his eyes; she
wanted to
trap it so
that when he
eventually left her,

she could
still remember
how to
breathe.

qwertygirl's picture

Metaphors

I love metaphors and this poem is full of them, I like the repitition of the line "All she wanted was", and I like the last line a lot too
"she could
still remember
how to
breathe."
Because it kind of ties everything together.

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