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As the Sun Rises

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Submitted by Schila on May 17, 2008 - 07:40.

One dark and gloomy night,
I watched the sun wane.
The scene was set,
Just like in a movie.
The sky was light,
Inviting some dark
to come into the world.

The colors of the sky,
Were blended perfectly,
The soft flush pinks,
The firey oranges, and brillant reds,
That seem to light up
The gloomy sky.

The sunset is like,
The pallet
Of a artist,
who paints
Just to show
the actuallity of life.
He uses real colors,
Like ebony, chartruse, and charchol,
and mixes them up to represent,

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I G2g

Submitted by Schila on May 17, 2008 - 07:41.

I got to go now... Ummm i haven't finished the last part yet, but if you have any suggestions..
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