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Cold

ParisianTwist's picture

It's hard not to glitter-shudder
with the dropsy-spatter
of icy-slander
rain
wrapping its bitter-sugar
Teardrop-tentacles
around my
Liar-lover
heart.

Katelyn's picture

I absolutely love this.

Submitted by Katelyn on May 19, 2008 - 16:52.

I don't know how you could improve it. Nice job.
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