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You & Your Voice

rbbrdck_137's picture
Submitted by rbbrdck_137 on May 19, 2008 - 19:05.

Your sweet, soothing voice wrapps around me,
surrounding me with nothing but warmth.
Your delicate cartoon-like face reaches out to me.
You smile at and your soft dimples form.
You close your eyes concentrating, and supporting your passion.
Your last note of the precious song fills the room,
causing everyone to melt with a smile.

*SORRY...this blog is really bad!!!!!

mixedmusic333's picture

This is not a bad blog post

Submitted by mixedmusic333 on May 19, 2008 - 19:14.

This is not a bad blog post at all. Sure, there are spelling errors you can fix and minor revisions, but the piece has potential to be really powerful. I know this feeling from music exactly.

My suggestion would be to revise closely and possibly extend this-- you're on a roll with description here. I'd love to read more.

Also- never apologize for anything you post. It's just completely bad karma.

rbbrdck_137's picture

Thanks...

Submitted by rbbrdck_137 on May 20, 2008 - 17:30.

Rbbrdck_137
thanks...but it really isn't that good. I really think im done with this. :(

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