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Connected

Mango's picture

Our present
Becomes our
Past,
And our future
Is made by history.

It's all connected,
We're all connected,
And if we can't
Change the present,
We will die
As one.

miss_literal's picture

deep. doesn't really sound

Submitted by miss_literal on May 29, 2008 - 12:16.

deep. doesn't really sound like you, though. are you ok?

qwertygirl890123's picture

I agree

Submitted by qwertygirl890123 on May 29, 2008 - 12:18.

I love the way it sounds, but its nothing like anything else you've written
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Everyone Else has signitures so I'm getting one

emotive.eleven's picture

Wow it's so deep!!! I had to

Submitted by emotive.eleven on May 29, 2008 - 12:20.

Wow it's so deep!!! I had to read it out loud to fully grasp the meaning, it was so.... deep. Very inspiring, though.

Mango's picture

*smilz*

Submitted by Mango on June 4, 2008 - 19:38.

Thank you.
Yes, i'm quite fine, and I agree this is unlike most of my other pieces. But that was what I was going for. I've been writing about the same kind of things a lot. i took a break to kind of... you know, find something more interesting... this is something that came up. *smilz*

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