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Assassinated on Saturday

sinisterVT's picture

Peoples fear is what brings them too hate
Change is what people fear
A change in the day
A change in the night
A change in the light
Fear in the dark
Distrust breeds hatred
And hatred brings destruction
Destruction too keeps from change
Change is what we need
And people have to die for it
You have to be willing to see to the end
Even if it’s your end
End all suffering
End all killing
End the strife
"If I was president, I'd get elected on Friday, Assassinated on Saturday, buried on Sunday"
Fear of change brings murder

qwertygirl890123's picture

I like how this has one

Submitted by qwertygirl890123 on May 31, 2008 - 21:09.

I like how this has one phrase that rhymes, but the rest is just kind of flowing, and then the way you use some repitition at the end is pretty cool.
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-Greg

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