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I only have 12 days of
I only have 12 days of actual school left
and
18 days if you count weekends!!!
That's when our school ends
That's when our school ends too! June 12, right?
cool
yup June 12!!!
Lucky!
We get out the on Friday the Thirteenth... sketchy, huh?
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How does one prove their existance?
wow...
seems it was only yesterday that we were counting the days down last year...
man how time flies.
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
I know!!! Soon I'll be in
I know!!! Soon I'll be in High School. You're a Senior, right? Well good luck, for whatever you decide to do.
Only a week more till our Great Escape trip...:)
garr...
slap myself out of senioritis firstly....
got to write a 7 page essay..... yuck.
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
I hate it how we still have
I hate it how we still have homework even though we only have like 2 weeks of school left.
Good luck with your essay:D
grrr.... i end June
grrr.... i end June 13...
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I end the NINEteenth "I
I end the NINEteenth
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
I'm sorry:( Just 2 and a 1/2
I'm sorry:( Just 2 and a 1/2 more weeks:)
ooo that suckss.... sorry
ooo that suckss.... sorry :[
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
But we're taking a lot of
But we're taking a lot of field trips, so it's not really that many school days.
Like on Thursday, my French class is going to Montreal for the day.
That's pretty cool.
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
Yay June
Yay June 12!
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"da da da da"
-Greg
I have my French final on
I have my French final on that day.
But I like French, so it's good.
(It's the ONLY class I like...)
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
I had a french final last
I had a french final last friday...
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"da da da da"
-Greg
not fair!! this year my
not fair!! this year my class hasnt [and will not] go on any field trips... and we wont until next year around this time... it really sucks. i live in a really really really poor town.
Montreal?? we went two years ago for a Social Studies thing... ughhh i wish i could go. actually the 6th graders get to go this year and im seriously considering sneaking onto the bus....
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
That sucks. :(
That sucks. :(
Is your town poor because of that school fire a few years ago?
(J told me about it.)
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
no, not us... we're just
no, not us... we're just poor because we're small. we have pre-k through 8th grade and only 250 kids total. i will have about 30 kids in my graduating class next year...
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I am seriously amazed...
I am seriously amazed... Your only in seventh grade!? judging by your writing I would have guessed at least ninth...
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"da da da da"
-Greg
The first time I read your
The first time I read your stuff I thought you were a junior...
No joke.
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
wow... thanks... i
wow... thanks... i appreciate it!
tee hee [im a good writer!!] YAY!!
sorry, i know its bad but i seriously judge myself on other peoples opinions and i LOVE YOUR OPINION!!!
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
Ya, your stuff is pretty
Ya, your stuff is pretty amazing
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"da da da da"
-Greg
Oui oui, mes amies "I think
Oui oui, mes amies
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
why thank you, both of
why thank you, both of you...
[i am secretly bursting with joy on the inside right now... :-D]
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
Wow!!! 30 kids. There are
Wow!!!
30 kids. There are about 100 in my class.
Are you in Alpha?
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
no, we dont have those
no, we dont have those 'groups' at my school. the whole 8th grade class next year will have only about 30 kids...
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
Wow. That is very small. But
Wow.
That is very small.
But it sounds preferable to a large screaming horde.
"I think you can let go of my arm now." -M
"And your waist?" -C
"If you don't mind." -M
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Sorry, that was taken WAAY out of context. It's from a short story I like.
yes it is very nice.
yes it is very nice. everyone knows everyone, everyones grandparents grew up with everyone else's grandparents... we're your average hick town. :] ss'ept me of course...
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Edward: "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb.."
Bella: "what a stupid lamb"
Edward: "what a sick, masochistic lion.."
Quoted from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
teehee
Squeejay gets out on the 10th!!!!
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Tomorrow the day I've
Tomorrow the day I've counting up for 2 whole weeks,
GREAT ESCAPE DAY!!
I'm praying it doesn't rain, but woohoo!
omg
I only have four actual days of school left!!!
and 6 if you count our last weekend!
yay
have fun on your great escape!
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
thanks
the Great escape was awesome! I might write a poem on it later. But anyway this is an amazingly hard fact to believe:
ONLY 2 1/2 MORE DAYS OF SCHOOL!!
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What a waste of internet space.
Oh well:D
Grr......
We still have four whole days left... *sob*
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
I know... *sobs* But... we
I know... *sobs* But... we will be free shortly.. ^_^
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
We're almost there. We can
We're almost there. We can make it!
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Babbit: I have no depth perception....
Yami: The wall has no depth!
But...
It's still too far away... and it's too hot... *sigh* Maybe I'll go swimming again today... it's my only hope of surviving at this point.
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
*crawling like dieing of
*crawling like dieing of thirst*
Summer!!!!......
....
...
Summer!!
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
*sigh*
I think I'll lie on the floor during class today... Eisenman will just have to teach me Chinese while I'm lying on the floor keeping cool.
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
Hey, at least you guys
Hey, at least you guys weren't sweating bullets yesterday lifting a ton of junk to the middle school and then building the set. I swear I thought my arms were gonna give out. Those platforms get heavy after a while!
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Babbit: I have no depth perception....
Yami: The wall has no depth!
hehuhohiha!!!!
last day last day last day!!!!!!!!
SPAMP!!!!!!!!
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg
LAST DAY!!!!
SENIOR YEAR}
NO SCHOOL MORE EVER NEVER MORE
NO MORE SCHOOL FRIENDS EVER NEVER EVER MORE
I LEAVE FOR UTAH 18TH!!!!!
aaarrrrrggggghhhhh!!!!
don't go so quickly, my life!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
AAAARRRRRGGGGGEEEEEE!!!!!!! S
AAAARRRRRGGGGGEEEEEE!!!!!!!
So soon????
*Howling at the moon in awkward turtle fashion... ask apples*
LLaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrggggeee!!!!!!
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Why are people quoting me so much??? I don't mind. I'm honored in fact. I guess I'm just curious..
You're so lucky!!!! Have an
You're so lucky!!!!
Have an awesome time at Utah!
*sob*
We'll miss you lots and lots squeejay... *sob* Try to keep in touch! I know we will!!!
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"I do not need to be remembered. All that matters is that I am here, in this moment."
Seriously?
It's your last day? I still have a week left.
Aww, right, you're a senior. Oh, no. We'll miss you!
*sigh*
yes... its my last day... goodbye world I once knew.....
bty, nice pic
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A thousand tears rolling down your cheek are healed by a single tear on the shoulder of a friend.
Are you looking forward to
Are you looking forward to your new post-graduation life?
Usagi Help!!!!
Something horrible has just occurred.
Rocky came into the lab singing "The Hills Are Alive With the Sound of Music" and gave me a "revised" version of my schedule. Minus the two unwanted study halls. Having replaced them with CONCERT CHOIR!!!!!!!!!!
I don't sing. Well. At all.
Concert choir? How does
Concert choir? How does martial arts equal concert choir? Ah, Rocky...
You can sing, you just don't think you can. If you want to change, talk to him again. Ask for something specific.