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awsmpossum's picture

Fingers
Dancing in strange circles
On keyboard letters
With hidden meanings
Making words that I can't understand.
I'm using far too many
To say something so simple,
Something I shouldn't be thinking,
Be saying.
You don't make it easy
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qwertygirl890123's picture

I don't exactly know why I

Submitted by qwertygirl890123 on June 11, 2008 - 11:38.

I don't exactly know why I like this so much, but I do. I like how you broke it up with periods and commas, and how each line could be its own individual poem if it wanted to (sorry, I personify writing)_____________________________
"Ich muss durch den monsun
Hinter die welt"

awsmpossum's picture

Thanks, qwerty :) I'm glad

Submitted by awsmpossum on June 11, 2008 - 16:58.

Thanks, qwerty :)
I'm glad that you like it.

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