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He didn't just say, he promised that he would show me what thunder looked like, but I believed his sparkled lies, and now I'm left picking up the shards of my shattered heart.
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One![]() He didn't just say, he promised that he would show me what thunder looked like, but I believed his sparkled lies, and now I'm left picking up the shards of my shattered heart.
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wow... beautiful. so short,
wow... beautiful.
so short, but so poetic...
:)SnowStars
Thanks,
Thanks, snowstars.
I think I needed to hear that.
That deserves a second
Thank you.