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How he broke my heart

Schila's picture
Submitted by Schila on July 9, 2008 - 19:14.

Verse 1:
Behind her laughing smile,
is a broken heart.
A girl who can shed,
no more tears,
cause she's cried for the world,
the moon, the stars,
and the violence,
that never stops

Chorus:
Who says the world,
won't stop for you?

( I hope to put out a podcast with the words on it soon!:)
Do any of you have a suggestion for after you? or a suggestion for change?

gradster1's picture

Is this all?

Submitted by gradster1 on July 9, 2008 - 20:45.

I think I really want to get into writing songs. :)

Anyway, is this all you've got? Or is it just so far?

/gradster(1)/

http://nmhwu.wordpress.com/

SnowStars's picture

Sounds great! I'm looking

Submitted by SnowStars on July 9, 2008 - 20:57.

Sounds great!
I'm looking forward to the podcast...
:)SnowStars

Schila's picture

YESS!!!

Submitted by Schila on July 11, 2008 - 08:01.

Yay! now i got some fans! All right! For gradster1... You should totally start writing songs. It is really easy to do when you get the hang of it.. recording them, however is much harder(thus my not being able to post a podcast... yet..) and i am going to add onto it as soon as i figure some more to add... The guitar is coming... OK... i have got the chorus down pat and it sounds great, but the verses are a little iffy... To snowstars... thanks! I have no idea when i'll get around to a podcast, but i hope very soon!
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Credula vitam spes fovet et melius cras fore semper dicit - Credulous hope supports our life, and always says that tomorrow will be better. (Tibullus)

gradster1's picture

:)

Submitted by gradster1 on July 14, 2008 - 00:59.

Care to collaborate?

I am dreadfully shy in some aspects.

/gradster(1)/ - cheerful and indifferently bored

http://nmhwu.wordpress.com/

Schila's picture

Sure!

Submitted by Schila on July 14, 2008 - 10:36.

Do you want to start a new song in collabration???
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Credula vitam spes fovet et melius cras fore semper dicit - Credulous hope supports our life, and always says that tomorrow will be better. (Tibullus)

Schila's picture

OR...

Submitted by Schila on July 14, 2008 - 10:37.

Work on this song, or something else... dosent matter to me! :)
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Credula vitam spes fovet et melius cras fore semper dicit - Credulous hope supports our life, and always says that tomorrow will be better. (Tibullus)

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