You just don't get it
You beat her up
and you cut her down
and you still
don't get
it.
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Woah...
nice
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"It's either broken or it's French."
powerful. ___________________
powerful.
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Last night in my bed, I stared up at the stars in the sky and thought, "WHERE THE HELL IS THE CEILING?!"
hahaa i love that quote...
I hate him to EE. I like the
I hate him to EE.
I like the short-ness
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"Yeah. Um...I had an adrenaline rush. It's very common. You can Google it."
-Edward Cullen (sigh)
I don't think you know who
I don't think you know who I'm talking about. Well, you know them, but I think you're talking about another beater- upper/ cutter- downer, who this poem could also potentially be about.
whoever it's about, it's
whoever it's about, it's amazing................
~miss lit~