Bad poem i was bored
you held the pistol
half heartidly
you strummed your guitar
like it was the last thing standing
you mind confused you muttered your will
they spun down in through your empty shell
ill always be with you is what i swore
so ill grab a gun and continue on
hold my hand an we'll leave soon
the trigger locked loaded ready to go
you looked into my eyes and said
im high as hell why are you with me
he shot that bullet through his mouth
i guess he decided to test my promise
so i grabbed that gun fully loaded
decended a chase of will
and found him up in heaven sober, miserable
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I disagree. This is not a
I disagree. This is not a "bad" poem (god, I hate it when people say things are "bad"... when they rarely are)
I actually like this one a lot.
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)
its not bad i just know i
its not bad i just know i prbly couild hav done better so compared to tht its bad- im lazy today hense being a mouse potato
"happiness shines in a cirle of ponies"..words to live by!
YAY! (sorry it makes me
YAY! (sorry it makes me happy that you no longer think its bad...)
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"When you live for the fight, for the blood, the relationships you form are tenuous and easily broken."
-Jasper Hale (who I like more than Edward...)
yay *dances happily because
yay *dances happily because other ppl r happy* =))"happiness shines in a cirle of ponies"..words to live by!