Atomic

This is a new song I wrote a couple of weeks ago. I'm going to eventually podcast it, but I recently broke a string on my guitar and haven't been able to get a new one yet. So, I thought I'd just post the lyrics in the interim.
She cried & cried
that day she left you
she left behind
all she'd wanted
she buried deep inside
all her longings
she closed her eyes
stepped out into the
cool grey sky.
She cannot listen
to her thoughts again
she won't let open
all of her mind
she was broken
was not an easy fix
now she doesn't circle
every atom
with her eyes.
She awoke in the night
wandering around
said wouldn't you like
some
peace of mind?
She ran so far
so far ahead
she's moving at
the speed of sound
she's settling in
into her seat
she's wasting time
spinning
'round this room.
She awoke in the night
wandering around
said wouldn't you like
some
peace of mind?
She cried & cried
that day she left you...
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the way this is written it
the way this is written it remind me of a song called
"she's falling apart"
dont ask me why
cus i hav no idea
it just
does
This is beautiful, Obscure.
This is beautiful, Obscure. I look forward to the podcast.
Déjà vu! And I love it
Déjà vu!
And I love it the second time around.