Haunted

I would first like to say that I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Your poem seems especially appropriate for the time of year and the upcoming halloween celebrations. Your sentences are short but very specific and well written. However, I did happen to notice that the word "glowing" was spelt incorrectly. I understand that the use of several exclamation points helps to illustrate the sense of being scared, but I also think this piece of writing could be equally or even more powerful without the use of a lot of exclamation points. Your poem is easy to read and very entertaining. I also enjoyed how you ended the poem without telling the reader what happens. Good Job!

I really like your repitition in different lines, it makes it seem almost like it could be a song. It gives it a bit of a spooky feel at the same time. I really like it, it doesn't rhyme yet it seems to have the impact of a poem that does. Good job writing this!