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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
Alternate: Splat! Use that word in a story or a poem.

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Night

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Submitted by icucumber7 on October 31, 2008 - 11:32.

She comes awake, not quite too soon,
and throws her blue silk
all the way up high.

She spins across the silver moon
And giggles as she throws
the stars into the sky.
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This poem came from the "and giggles as she throws/ the stars into the sky" line. I'm not sure about the first stanza, so any comments/help would be appreciated! Thanks!

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Submitted by spaceboy33 on October 31, 2008 - 13:11.

age old question. save your soul with silence or display your world, naked and vulnerable, for society to condemn you. nice work. you got the thought down well.

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