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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
Alternate: Splat! Use that word in a story or a poem.

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I miss you

Turquoise Wishes's picture
Submitted by Turquoise Wishes on November 18, 2008 - 20:14.

I just want to say I miss you.
I miss everything about you.
Your laugh, and smile, but most of all,
I miss your love.
How you loved me beyond meaning.
How we could be together and no one knew.
Now we can't see eachother, I feel almost broken.
We said we would always be together forever, but its different now.
Forever has just gotten harder.
All I wanted to say was that I missed you.

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I've felt this way too.

Submitted by Schila on November 18, 2008 - 20:20.

and i've grown to hate the words "just friends"
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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer. -Albert Campus

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me, too. "just friends"

Submitted by Turquoise Wishes on November 18, 2008 - 20:50.

me, too. "just friends" sucks....

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"It's like the darkness in the light."
-Rihanna, Disturbia.

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i actually wrote a song using those words

Submitted by Schila on November 19, 2008 - 16:28.

with my friend! so cool!
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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer. -Albert Campus

I understand that this is

Submitted by BosanskaSelma92 on November 20, 2008 - 10:23.

I understand that this is about your bf/gf, but it reminds me of my friend who moved away and i Miss her A LOT!

I really like your story! It

Submitted by souljagirl506 on November 20, 2008 - 19:14.

I really like your story! It has lots of meaning and feelings to it and i totally understand what you went through! Great job! :)

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oh, thank you!

Submitted by Turquoise Wishes on November 22, 2008 - 12:16.

Thanks you guys! I really try to let other people think of their own experiences when they read my work. I know when I read someone else work I always think of some of the things that have happened to me, so when I write I really want people to think of their own thoughts instead of mine.
Thanks!

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"It's like the darkness in the light."
-Rihanna, Disturbia.

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