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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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Gone

apples's picture

You left me
You abandoned me
I've lost all my trust
No matter how much I try
I can't get it back
You took what
Little life I had
When you left
And now I'm the one
Suffering for your
Selfish actions
So I hope your happy
That I've become
As cold-hearted
As you

Phisher101090's picture

That's really deep

Submitted by Phisher101090 on November 21, 2008 - 14:29.

I really like how you showed all your hurt and anger in this piece. It really pulls people into it. Amazing job!

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