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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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Never Apart

ken's picture

Last night I had this feeling
I know I just had to hear your voice
One more time
Before I fall into the void
I know you’re having doubts
About how I feel about you
I just want to let you know
My love for you
Grows everyday we’re together
I never want to break apart
I never want to play the part
I don’t want to break your heart
I don’t want you to break my heart
So lets stay together for now and forever.

Never Apart

Submitted by KHurley on November 21, 2008 - 13:43.

This particle piece of work is very short, simple, cute, and full of meaning.

I like that you kept everything simple, but yet full of meaning, passion, and intentions. Not only are you saying what is being felt, but what the desired outcome is as well.

I think this is great!

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