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Running through my mind, pre 6:15 - I have a friend, who had twilight written on her shirt today. The only thing was, the shirt was under her sweater, so it looked like she was flashing people when she showed them. She then stole my sweat shirt and was "SUPER TWILIGHT GIRL" on the bus.
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Not from meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I
Not from meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I GIVE IT ---- THE HIGHEST POSSIBLE REVIEW!!!
I see it tomorrow... I CAN'T
I see it tomorrow... I CAN'T WAIT.
*Civ*
I didn't think it was that
I didn't think it was that good. Fortunately, it wasn't disappointing because I wasn't expecting much. They under utilized Alice, and Bella and Edward looked exceedingly awkward on screen together.
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"Who you are defines what you do"
Max, Across The Universe
ASAP: Affluent Students Aspiring for Perspicacity
I was actually impressed- i
I was actually impressed- i expected them to totally botch it.
Though you are right- Edward wasn't as "smooth" as i would have liked- they were a bit awkward. I loved Jasper in the movie though- Jacob made me laugho- and Alice was so-so for me...
Rosalie- I was impressed- she (in her breif appearances) was great.
I didn't know Eric was Asian
I didn't think Laurence was Black.
I do admit that Bella and
I do admit that Bella and Edward looked awkward. But, in the book, Bella had always thought that Edward was way too good for her, so it kind of was true. But yeah, I do think Edward could have been a little more smoother. Rob thought too much about how Edward was depressed (even though he wasn't really) so I guess that kind of made him look unsure and awkward.
Well, in Twilight, it said that Eric had greasy black hair so I kind of imagined him like that.
I wasn't sure about Laurent but he was a good actor. The book said that Laurent had thick locks (or something like that).
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Don't worry,
I'll catch you if you fall.
But you won't fall
Because
Falling requires landing
And you won't get to
Landing because
I'll catch you first.
~Civilized (or just Civ)
I thought it was okay. I
I thought it was okay. I mean, of course it was amazing because it was TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! Unfortuantly they gave the cullens barely any lines and rare screen appearences. I loved jasper as well, (he is my favorite) i just wish that they had given him more lines and appearences. and another thing, in like the first couple times they showed jasper, he looked like such a creeper! I did like the baseball scene though, that was cool.
but yeah, overall it wold have been wayyyyy better if emmett was funnier, edward prettier, alice less ditzy and as for jasper, i would've liked to have seen him have more than FOUR LINES!!!!!!!!!
i strongly urge people to read the book, otherwise you will be lost. plus, it is an awesome book!
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"And you ducked your head like a good southern gentleman and said, 'I'm sorry Ma'am.'"
-Alice and Jasper (Eclipse)
Did Jasper even say anything
Did Jasper even say anything at all in the movie?
He spoke very little He
He spoke very little
He talked in the hotel room at the end
I think that was it
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"Who you are defines what you do"
Max, Across The Universe
ASAP: Affluent Students Aspiring for Perspicacity
He definitely should have
He definitely should have said more, I think.
Although he is really kind of a background character until Eclipse comes around.
was he the one that said
was he the one that said "its nice to meet you- or somethign along the lines of tht