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New Powers

Submitted by maxaire on October 2, 2007 - 13:19.

New Powers

Newfound powers,
Exploring possibilities
Wildness taking over

Power unimaginable
Optimal performance
Wise decisions
Enhanced senses
Recognizing enemies
Seeming to understand

This is a great poem. I

Submitted by smcmentor on March 31, 2008 - 18:59.

This is a great poem. I think it's very interesting, and it provokes a ton of questions for me. You really have me wondering about the background... what are the powers? Where did they come from?

I think one thing to work on would be increasing the flow. The poem reads as a bit jumpy, but maybe making some transitions in there would help how the poem moves?

Great work!! Keep it up. :)

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