Freckles

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Submitted by whispered_screams on Wed, 06/03/2009 - 10:13pm

I wish I had freckles,
Like stars in the sky.
Scattered across everywhere,
Leaving beauty in unseen places.
I wish you’d find my constellations,
Find my Orion, my little dipper.
Connect the dots with your fingers.
Leave my stars longing for more.
I’ll shine bright for you.
Climb onto your rocket and,
Be my astronaut.

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This is so...

Submitted by 7yellowdaisies on Thu, 06/04/2009 - 5:59am.

This is really creative. I think that it is really cool how you related freckles to stars in the sky and how you can connect the dots! Really fun to read and it also made me think about how special my freckles are! This was great! :)

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Ugh

Submitted by Wers on Thu, 06/04/2009 - 11:10am.

I have freckles and I hate them!!! You can have them! Haha. But I really liked this...maybe I'll look for constellations today when I get home... :p

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i have freckles

Submitted by lizzy writes on Mon, 03/29/2010 - 7:41pm.

their all on my nose!! hahaha *laughs* :P
anyway, i liked how u described the freckles.
by the way, if you spend a lot of time in the sun, you might get freckles ;)

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