Confess

Parrotfish802's picture

A disconnect
bestween emotions
and ink.
So now
everything
stays bottled up,
always
threatening
to explode and destroy.

It's a sad
state of affairs
to lose a big chunk
of who you've
been,
even though
you're no longer
that
person anymore.

Critical blows
are thrown
by the weakest.

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Bailyraee's picture

The last lines

bring it home for me.
Alot of power in a small space.

I also like where you choose to break your lines.

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"The point is not understanding what I write but feeling it." -Bob Dylan

Yellow's picture

"threatening to explode and

"threatening
to explode and destroy"
perfect.

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"When you've seen beyond yourself, then you may find, peace of mind is waiting there.” -George Harrison

wow...nice

wow...nice

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