Confess

A disconnect
bestween emotions
and ink.
So now
everything
stays bottled up,
always
threatening
to explode and destroy.
It's a sad
state of affairs
to lose a big chunk
of who you've
been,
even though
you're no longer
that
person anymore.
Critical blows
are thrown
by the weakest.
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The last lines
bring it home for me.
Alot of power in a small space.
I also like where you choose to break your lines.
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"The point is not understanding what I write but feeling it." -Bob Dylan
"threatening to explode and
"threatening
to explode and destroy"
perfect.
"When you've seen beyond yourself, then you may find, peace of mind is waiting there.” -George Harrison
wow...nice
wow...nice