Vermont Writes Day: Tuesday, Feb. 7 INFO

YWP is encouraging schools (and organizations and businesses) to stop what they're doing and write for 7 minutes on 2.7.11. Prompts and info, click here.

avoidance

Submitted by romner on Fri, 03/12/2010 - 8:54am

I was in gym
I was against him
He threw the ball
It hit the wall
I avoided the dodgeball

i avoid capital letters
it makes my writing betters
my sentences only have so many
i don't write any

Rhyming

Submitted by Tenzley on Sun, 03/14/2010 - 3:51pm.

The beginning line "I was in gym" sets a good scene. The following lines all support good detail while describing a story. I like how you responded to the prompt, but I would have loved to hear more things you avoid. You should try expanded your thoughts. I like the rhyming included to express your avoidance. I also was curious to why your first part had capital letters? Great ideas, keep them going!

A University of Vermont College Mentor

 thank you, i tried my best.

Submitted by romner on Wed, 12/01/2010 - 8:46am.

 thank you, i tried my best. thank you <sniff>

 NO YOU

Submitted by romner on Thu, 12/02/2010 - 8:29am.

 NO YOU DIDN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!