Avoidance

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Submitted by Ninja_Fox on Fri, 03/12/2010 - 9:00am

Avoidance

I try to avoid a lot of things,
like scary people in wal-mart,
and my mom's eggplant casserole.
Yes there are a lot of things I try to avoid.
Like the 3rd floor of my school,
or the peas in my macaroni and cheese
But there are some things I don't try to avoid,
like going to lunch early,
or seconds on dessert.
Avoiding things is a habit of mine,
but I've been trying to avoid it.

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Honestly, the best poem I've read on this site.

Submitted by nickgrubinger on Tue, 03/16/2010 - 12:10pm.

This was awesome! My new favorite poem, the last line is definitely the best, amazing.

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Thanks, a lot

Submitted by Ninja_Fox on Thu, 03/18/2010 - 7:46am.

I just started on this website and that comment was really uplifting. It's always good to get some positive feedback. I have some Haikus up now, you should try them. They sound a whole lot different than this though. More serious, and solemn.