Phoebe Stone Workshop -- UPDATED

Phoebe Stone, the critically acclaimed writer of children's books, gave a wonderful workshop on characters and voice Saturday. We had 15 students there ranging from fifth to 11th grade. Thanks to all.
Now for the online part.
For those of you at the session -- and for those who want to join in now -- the essence of the idea is this:
There is a magic butterfly which will grant to the possessor whatever is your heart's content.
While the final outcome is not completely clear, the idea is to create a character that wants, needs, desires this butterfly. Tell us why he/she wants it. Some have already posted your beginnings.
As we progress, Phoebe will post your next steps -- which will follow the normal arc of storytelling -- and then we'll decide what to do with the final product -- should we merge them and edit your work into one piece? Should we polish them and publish them as separate stories within the same "anthology" to be read in a certain sequence?
So Phoebe will soon be looking for your pieces. CREATE a NARRATIVE, keep your writing in third person -- though you can go into the thinking of your characters. Use the present tense, unless you are getting to some backstory or contextual details.
Remember these words by Phoeobe: "There are so many ways to begin writing a story. Some people start with a plot or an idea. I start with a character and a voice. Very often that character will lead me to the story/plot or I will find it within the character."
Final note: in keywords put butterfly, stone
cheerio and thanks again to Phoebe
gg
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So afraid...
...to break the ice, I'm sure. We have seven definites...
gg
I'll be there
I'll be there.
*In lack of a better comment*
Oh. Okay.
I'll say it here too then. Saucey is a yes.
I'll be there.
I'll be there.
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-Qwerty
Affluent Students Aspiring for Perspicacity
Never
I'm Coming
I'm coming.
speedmonkey
Maybe I'll actually bring
Maybe I'll actually bring cupcakes this time.
Seeing as the reno-mayhem is almost through with.
OR
dumplings.
Because I have to make them for a Chinese project anyway o.O.
____________________
-Qwerty
Affluent Students Aspiring for Perspicacity
Never
Titania and I will be
Titania and I will be there!
Cheers~
Muse
If you want to build a ship, don't drum up people to collect wood and don't assign them tasks and work, but rather teach them to long for the immensity of the sea.
~Antoine de Saint Exupéry
Yes,
I'll be there as well.
Do you still want us to send
Do you still want us to send you an email?
I am going to bring...
I'm bringing homemade brownies. *Yummm!*
speedmonkey
Can't make it this weekend :(
Can't make it this weekend :( See you all next time!
...I ran out of cupcake
...I ran out of cupcake wrappers...
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-Qwerty
Affluent Students Aspiring for Perspicacity
Never
For those of you who couldn't make it...
...check out the Narrative Writing Group. If you aren't a member, join: http://youngwritersproject.org/narrativegroup
Instructions and examples are there if you want to join in the writing project and get some feedback!
gg