What You Wish For

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I've been working on this all day without really knowing why. The only reason I'm uploading this in its unfinished form is that people want to hear what I've got so far- and this is the easiest way to do it.

I think I'll finish it tomorrow.

Without further ado, though, have a listen to my a capella cover of Guster's What You Wish For. (The only non-voice component is me hitting things- my desk, a book, or my head, I'm pretty sure.)

The lyrics, up to where I got (which is three quarters of the way through the bridge):

Woke up today to everything grey
And all that I saw just kept goin' on and on

Sweep all the pieces under the bed
Close all the curtains and cover my head

And what you wish for won't come true
You aren't surprised, though, are you? (traditionally, it's 'love', not 'though', but I like it better this way)

1. If this serenade (centred)
2. Repeat after me (right)
3. Just a little bit closer (left)

1. Is not what you want
2. Do what I say
3. Caught up in a lie

1. It's just how it is
2. Won't change a thing
3. Got a little bit colder

1. It keeps goin'
1, 2, 3. On and on

Come out, come out, wherever you are
Would you do it all over right from the start?

And what you wish for won't come true
You aren't surprised, though, are you?

So what you wish for won't come true
You aren't surprised, though, are you?

Once had this dream- crashed down in Oz
Not black and white, but where the colors are...

(The rest, to come:

I never dreamed that I would let it go

And I will get what I deserve

Keep all the secrets under the bed
Open the curtains, forget what I said

And what you wish for could come true
You aren't surprised, though, are you?

So what you wish for could come true
You aren't surprised, though,

Are you?)

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Usagi's picture

Guster

This sounds brilliant, Ana, and much clearer uploaded than over the phone...

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gradster1's picture

Sorry about that. It was

Sorry about that. It was probably gusty out there.

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-A

threeguesses's picture

I adore that song. I quite

I adore that song. I quite liked this. The whistling was a nice touch. I'd love to hear the finished version. :D

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Serendipity's picture

I also like this. I love the

I also like this. I love the lyrics, and the vocals are spectacular. I would love to hear more of your work.
Neat-o work!

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The one and only,
Dana Lee


I march forward, through the rain of fears and the winds of uncertainty so that one day I will have quenched my undying thirst for life.

Sambo's picture

gradster,

This is fantastic! You sound great, and the lyrics are very interesting. I quite enjoyed the layering of harmonies.

Beautifully done.

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intrepid_heart's picture

This is amazing! Very

This is amazing! Very creative, and well put-together.

Great job. ☺

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"You have to destroy something to make it beautiful." -Gerard Way

 

Neon Wings's picture

O.O This totally blew me

O.O

Move over Justin Beiber, someone new is coming in to town!

...

Please message me when you post the next part of this!!!

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"You wrote that the world doesn't need a savior,
but everyday I hear people crying out for one
four-of-clubs's picture

You say you have trouble with lyrics...psh

Your singing style is like Imogen Heap. I love it.

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"Wisdom is accepting that mystery is beyond understanding. That's what makes it mystery."~Greg Maguire

 
gradster1's picture

I do have trouble with

I do have trouble with lyrics; this isn't my own work. I'm just copying someone else.

... Also, I'd like to amend that. Mostly, I have trouble putting lyrics and music together. Doing each separately I'm fine.

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-A

Neon Wings's picture

Dude, you rock! ^^

Dude, you rock! ^^

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"You wrote that the world doesn't need a savior,
but everyday I hear people crying out for one
gradster1's picture

Thankee koindly.

Thankee koindly.

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Izziey's picture

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I really like this =D

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-Izziey