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Forgiveness

apples's picture
Submitted by apples on December 20, 2007 - 10:53.

Forgiveness is the key
That opens the door
To unhappiness
There is no need to
Forgive if they ddin't
Do something wrong
In the first place
If you forgive them
They'll simply hurt you
And then you'll be miserable
All over again
It's up to you
But hear my warning;
Forgiveness only leads
To more unhappiness

Usagi's picture

oh?

Submitted by Usagi on December 20, 2007 - 10:59.

Feeling a bit pessimistic today?

apples's picture

Last night

Submitted by apples on December 20, 2007 - 11:07.

I wrote all these last night...

"Without the tides, the ocean wouldn't be as oceany as it is."
-Pineapple_Babbit32's biology report... *sigh*
P.S. Coming to the YWP cnvention will make you happy! So come to it! Or else!

apples's picture

Last night

Submitted by apples on December 20, 2007 - 11:07.

I wrote all these last night...

"Without the tides, the ocean wouldn't be as oceany as it is."
-Pineapple_Babbit32's biology report... *sigh*
P.S. Coming to the YWP cnvention will make you happy! So come to it! Or else!

pineapple_babbit's picture

wow....

Submitted by pineapple_babbit on December 20, 2007 - 11:09.

I have the opposite idea.... I always say, "forgive and forget." Because we all make mistakes. I mean, If it is more than a few times, you should be more weary...
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