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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
Alternate: Splat! Use that word in a story or a poem.

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Cute Buddy Poem

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Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 3, 2008 - 16:42.

I got out all of the ingredients,
And putted them all in a bowl.
Then I put on my apron
And noticed it had a hole.

I made sure that all of the sticks
Were in their places in the mold,
And when I checked on the pan,
The power was off and it was cold.

When the mix finally got really hot,
I added the color pink.
Then when I tried to walk over,
I tripped and it flyed into the sink.

A little bit flyed into the mold
And it made a lollypop,
But on my way over here,
I felled and it got dropped…

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Before anyone says anything,

Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 3, 2008 - 16:45.

Before anyone says anything, I know the grammer is really bad. It is that was because it is part of the poem... It adds a sort of innocent child cuteness...
This was inspired by those things called emo buddies and they are cute little yellow and blue people and the yellow one is so sweent. It is like, "I made you a cookie, but I eated it."
Thats where the bad grammer came from....
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This is adorable :)

Submitted by mixedmusic333 on January 3, 2008 - 16:50.

This is adorable :)

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