Wake Up

Lexie's picture

Why couldn't you wake up and pray

Thanking God for another day

Was your life here such a living hell

That you didn't hear the alarm clock bell

For all the love you knew

Ending your life seems cuckoo

For all those who loved you too

You've left freinds feeling very blue

Why couldn't you wake up and pray

Thanking God for another day

Why couldn't you just wake up

And get down and pray

Why did you just give up

And throw your life away

Wake up! Wake up!

Wake up,

Damn it!  just WAKE UP!

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I just got this

This is about suicide and how to stop it, huh? Kinda like Circe In Memory. A rememberance.

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In a way

Actually, I guess it is.  When I wrote this I was thinking about what someone at school said to me in private.

I get depressed almost never, but I know several people that feel down almost all the time.

I then showed this to me mom, and she said since I put it in the Song catagory, that she wanted to hear it.

I sang it once, and noticed I didn't sing it exactly how I originally wrote it, so I made tgose changes, then posted it.

My mom says I should share it at church. I don't know if I'll do that, but at least now I have all the chords written for it too.

BTW, my mom cried when she heard it. Then proceeded to ask me 1000 questions about if I was okay, or if I needed anything and so on.  I was fine. I told her sort of about what happened at school. She told me not to ignore or avoid this person, that if they confided their thoughts to me, I only had 2 choices, tell a teacher, and or be a friend so that they don't feel so left out. If others are teasing them, find out, and do something about it. I didn't tell a teacher.

So yesterday, I brought some clothes to school - they were brand new, I hadn't worn them yet, but I thought they might fit her. They did. And she looked great. I don't care if I ever get them back.

My mom was right. Some new clothes that weren't going to be teased by others, made her feel better. It is a step forward.

Today she is still okay.

Not everybody has what others have, and those that have LOTS shouldn't tease the ones that don't.  They have no idea how much it really hurts.

But, if they do know, and do it anyway, then they are just mean and ugly (on the inside). That's what my mom tells me all the time. Guess she might be right again.

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Got it too!

It is good

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Wake up

It leaves ya hangin. yes or no. do people wake up, do they wat to. What is the motivation to wake up. or are people lazy, and just want to sleep.

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Interesting

You know, that is an interesting concept. Yes or No.  Do people really want to be motivated? are they lazy? do they want to live ? or just sleep?

And yes, she did leave us hanging.

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Thank you

Thank you.

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another purple moment

and i am awake

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another purple moment

Thank you for ypur comments. I hope no one  has those in the future.  I will always wear purple that day, for that.  I hope it ends there.

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OMG Wake Up!

Lexie,

 

Could  you send me the musiic or this. Another POWERFUL poem. Ok Song. You need to start Podcasting.

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I agree with Youngblood....

... Do you have a mic at home? Can you record yourself singing this and either do it as a direct record or do it through Audacity and upload it as an mp3?

Thanks, too, for the poem. Which is powerful. But I must confess that what you did to reach out to the friend is what truly moved me.

Thanks for sharing, for participating and for reaching out to people in your community.

gg

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GG agreeing with YoungBlood

I will get it Pocasted soon. I am not only trying to finish replying to all the messages I received in my inbox, but do my homework, not get stressed out about my winter Formal tomorrow night, but I am working on some new material that I have to perform this Saturday for a funeral- and I was only told about it yesterday.

So, please be patient, I will.

BTW, gg, how do you ever get anything done?  I mean, I read your post about 65 schools and over 800 new writing just in one day, and then thought about all the regular amount of blogs and submissions you get, then all the questions, and then the messages. I answered 12 messages this morning, went to school, then had practice, then was at VPT tonight, to come home and find over 20 new messages. How do you do it? I can't write that fast. Hmmm, maybe that's why my teachers are pushing me to write faster.

But seriously, I am seriously amazed by you and Susan, and all the work you both do at YWP for all of us.

If I forgot to say it recently, thank you.

 

 

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Another agree

After reading this comment by ggevalt, I went back and read this song again.

It is powerful.

Great job!

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Thank you - Music

I will get it Pocasted soon. I am not only trying to finish replying to all the messages I received in my inbox, but do my homework, not get stressed out about my winter Formal tomorrow night, but I am working on some new material that I have to perform this Saturday for a funeral- and I was only told about it yesterday.

So, please be patient, I will.

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Podcast and..

Yes please record this.

How was all your weekend stuff? hpefully not stressful.

What did you perform? anything we'd know?

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Agree

I agree. Sing this.

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Sing it, Sing it now! Sing it loud and proud

I could hear your voice over so many others yesterday at the Music Festival. I recognized you from your picture here. You were originally on the left end of the stage second from the top, wearing a white sequined beaded embellished shirt. When you sang Gloria Elcesior (1st song), your voice carried. I was in the second stand of bleachers. I knew it was definitely your voice I heard when you did the 3 song, that Spanish one, because the girls in the row above you weren't singing constantly, and the girl to your left was basically mumbling and looking down. I don't know what note you hit in that Jewish song (#4) but OMG!! OMG!!

You need to sing this. I can't wait to hear it.Thought, then next time you have to worry about a friend not waking up, just sing out a few of those, they'll wake up.

My family and I went with my grandparents, and aunt to hear my cousin in the band play. Saw your name in the brochure, and then looked through the choir and found you. Good job yesterday, and good job with this.

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OK, wow, weird, but wow. Thank you.

I will soon get it uploaded. That auditorium was packed.

Why didn't you come up afterwards to meet me?  That would have been great.

Thank you for going to the Music Festival, I hope you and your family enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading, and your comments.

:))

 

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@JanieH and Sing It

Wow! It sounds like you had a good time. You could really hear Lexie's voice over a crowd of other performers? Oh, I just saw that you don't know her personally, that it was only by her posted pic you recognized her. Are you sure the voice was hers then? Well, your description above, okay, probably. And if so, and you could write a rave, then yes, she need to get to putting the song up here.

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A Whiney Houston statement - WOW! This song is amazing

I just read this, and was thinking if this is what the people in Whitney Houston's life were thinking. I know you wrote this long before all her news was news, but it was that kind of reminder to me anyway.

You should sing this and get it up here.

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Didn't think about this and Whitney

But you are so right. Wow, nice observation and comment.

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Didn't think about this and Whitney

But you are so right. Wow, nice observation and comment.

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A Whiney Houston statement - WOW! This song is amazing

I just read this, and was thinking if this is what the people in Whitney Houston's life were thinking. I know you wrote this long before all her news was news, but it was that kind of reminder to me anyway.

You should sing this and get it up here.

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Why Double Post?

I agreed with your comment last time.

 

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I agree Whitney and others

this is wonderful.

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Hey Lexie!!!!!!!!

After reading this poem/lyrics/song now 3 times and reading all the comments about this piece, YOU NEED to record this ASAP!!

AWESOME job on this one!

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Still no Podcast?

Are you going to soon. I dont think any reference to Witney is needed. I do think we all need to wake up & stay that way.

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Still waiting

for this song to be uploaded.  A few others said they heard you working on it.  Would love to actually hear it.

 

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Still waiting

Comon Lexie, when are you getting this song uploaded. Want to hear it.

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Re: Those still waiting

Honestly, I have performed it five times now, and am still working out some chord changes.  My mom says she still likes the way I did it the first time, and she said the third one was a close second. I promise, I will get it "JUST THE WAY" I want it, and it will be shared. Hopefully, before April 15th, as a few others want me to perform it, and another one asked if I could on "LIVE TV".  Haven't done that ever, and that's got me scared into perfecting this.

So, please be patient.

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