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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
Alternate: Splat! Use that word in a story or a poem.

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Vous Êtes Mon Tout.

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Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 17, 2008 - 18:12.

Vous êtes le fleur de mon Coeur,
Un oiseau dans une arbre,
Une étoile dans le ciel,
Et un feuille dans octobre.
Vous êtes le neige dans le nuit,
Et l’eau dans la pluie.
Vous êtes mon monde,
Ma vie,
Vous êtes mon tout.

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Translation!!!!!

Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 17, 2008 - 18:22.

"You are the flower of my heart,
a bird in a tree,
a star in the sky,
and a leaf in October.
You are the snow in the night,
and the water in the rain.
You are my world,
My life,
My everything."
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hey!

Submitted by sb123 on January 17, 2008 - 18:24.

hey this is really cute. you write alot dont you! lol
i like alll your work its really good!
im ashley btw~
-Ash

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Thanks so much!!!

Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 17, 2008 - 18:30.

Oh, thank you so much! For me, writing is sort of a stress releiver thing... I don't know why... I love it...
I have read some of your writing too. It's first-rate.
*I am tring to improve my vocabulary by using weird words and sayings... Adjective especially...First rate is the thing that came up in the thesaurus. I hope if I use the thesaurus enough, things will start to stick... lol*
I am Emily by the way. Nice to meet you Ashley / sb123
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haha

Submitted by sb123 on January 17, 2008 - 18:36.

haha wow dont you sound smart..haha lol hi emily..

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J'aime ce! (I hope that's

Submitted by Mango on January 17, 2008 - 18:57.

J'aime ce! (I hope that's right, I've been taking french since about the second week of school this year and I could read almost everything you wrote! Yahooo!)

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Yeah!

Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 17, 2008 - 18:59.

Go Mango! You are a really fast leaner. I've been in french for.. *Counting* well, this will be my 8th year... lol. So I decided to start writing some french poetry... It's harder to find rhyming words... lol.
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im jellos

Submitted by sb123 on January 17, 2008 - 19:01.

wow im jellos, haha i have taken french for like 4 years..and i cant right in french!! or count past 80! haha lol
nice work both of you!

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