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Theme

I missed the theme the first time through, but the transformers the boys played with early in the story foreshadow what is to come. The theme is stated on p. 29 by the herbalist's wife who says to Jin, "It's easy to become anything you wish . . . so long as you're willing to forfeit your soul." His dream brings that back on p. 193 "So, little friend, you've done it."
Is it necessarily bad to transform oneself? Does one necessarily forfeit one's soul by doing so? What does that mean?

Throughout the entire book I

Throughout the entire book I was quite confused. It wasn't until about three froths in did I realize what was going on. I have never read a book that had like three separate little stories. It was just like a soap opera I also didn't realize that they would all tie into each other in the end. Now that I have finished the book I can see much foreshadowing. I thought the beginning was very random until i finished the book. I was not sure what the boy and his transformers had to do with the story. I don't think it is bad to transform ones self. You just need to have self control and don't lose yourself. I think a point in the story was that you should love yourself for who you are. I have never read a comic book so this was a interesting change of read for me.

Change

I think that is correct -- all people change as they mature, but the point is to change but to stay true to who you are -- not to try to become someone else -- someone you think other people will like better.

I was intrigued by the milk tea the boys drink at the end -- it is referred to as pearl milk tea. It has little lumps of something in it. In next year's GMBA title "Assassination Vacation" she writes of drinking bubble tea in a Chinese restaurant in Washington, D.C. -- it is on the site where the boarding house where Lincoln's assassination was planned. I wonder if that is the same as pearl milk tea. I have never seen this type of tea in a Chinese restaurant.

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