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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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A change in Helen

Submitted by love-u on February 4, 2008 - 11:53.

I guess in a way that Helen has changed actually she has changed quiet a few times. Helen is very dynamic she has a couple different hosts already and I’m not even that far in the book. Another change that Helen makes in the book is that while she was with her other host she never went to sleep but now that she is with James she has been falling asleep. I never thought of Helen as being the type of girl who would watch a guy change through his window but she does. I think that know that she is with James she isn’t as much like her self. I think that maybe Helen keeps changing so that she knows she is good enough for James. This could be like when a girl likes a guy she will try to find out the things he likes and will make herself out to be the perfect girl for him and really not be herself. This is like Helen because I think that she is changing for James in a way. But James in trying to change for her.

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i agree that helen has

Submitted by Veilleuxd on February 26, 2008 - 11:53.

i agree that helen has changed with each host and when she is with james she is totally diffrent like always wanting to have sex with him

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