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14. Procrastination. If you had more time, you’d be able to put it off longer. What do you put off to the last moment? Why? Tell a story about how you just barely got something done in time – or didn’t.
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conflict

Person vs. Person
I think one important conflict is the one between Cathy and Dan over Family night.
Dan is leaving family night to go to work when he is supposed to spend the night with his family. When Dan leaves Cathy is upset so she takes out her sewing to fixes Dan shirt that is not washed and she smelt it and it does not smell like him. When Dan gets home at 1 in the morning Helen smells something. I think the outcome is going to be Cathy is going to want a divorce from Dan. Why I think that is because when Cathy picked up Jen from school she is crying. What do you think?

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