week23-08
YWP Newspaper Series -- Week 23
Submitted by ggevalt on March 5, 2008 - 22:32.WEEK 23 -- March 4, 2008

Schedule of 2008 Prompts.
Week 23: Faking It and Role Model
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This week's student writing: Role Model and Faking It Or click on "week23-08" keyword at top.
Index of past weeks' pages.
Student content published on Tuesdays in Brattleboro Reformer, Times Argus, Rutland Herald and The Valley News and Tuesdays and Thursdays in The Burlington Free Press.
Role Model
Submitted by Kacie Collins on January 30, 2008 - 13:20.Role Model
By Kacie Collins
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Role Model
Submitted by faughnanc on January 30, 2008 - 13:09.Role Model
By Alexis Baun
Hartford Memorial Middle School, Grade 7
I want to be a role model
I want to have a little sister so she can look up to me
I want her to do everything with me
I want to teach her how to have fun
I want to be a role model
Who helps her when she is in trouble
Who makes her feel better when something bad happens
Faking It
Submitted by Davenport on January 30, 2008 - 11:33.Faking It
By Jessy Davenport
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
It's human nature to lie and deceive
If you do it once you will repeat
There is not one human you will ever meet
That never was a little too discreet
It’s so easy and fun
You’ll get a thrill each time it’s done
Even if you held the smoking gun
You will tell them you’re not the one*
Its pretty simple you see
Could you do it?
Submitted by hhpetersen on January 30, 2008 - 08:24.Could you do it?
By Halley Petersen
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
She looks up to you
So small and innocent
You, a hero in her eyes
Looks to you for the right decisions
For help
For aid
For anything.
You try to help
To be a role model
A precarious position
To always do what is right
Rather than what you want
In order to demonstrate to her
Faking Protection
Submitted by ChloePage on January 29, 2008 - 23:41.Faking Protection
By Chloe Dickinson
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
I study the curtain,
Its dusty red ripples hide me from their eyes.
I am the performer, the one who tells lies.
My life is a stage, but the curtain won't lift,
It hides me from the world, a place I don't fit.
A mask over my face, I cannot stay behind,
The curtain won't lift, but I part it with my mind.
Fakin' It
Submitted by bizzle on January 29, 2008 - 13:53.Fakin' it
By Biz Alessi
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Everyday a masquerade
Everyday a new game to play
A newly birthed mask for a newly birthed day
A chameleon trying to survive
Fakin’ my identity today
Yes fakin’ it everyday to please
To stay off my knees and succeed
Who can say I’m not what I say I am
Can you tell me who to be?
I’m a little lost

I Lost...
Submitted by Farkash13Daemon31 on January 29, 2008 - 13:44.I Lost . . .
By Eloise Higgins
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
I betrayed you once,
My love,
My dear.
I betrayed you twice,
My dear,
My love.
I betrayed you thrice,
My love,
And I lost that Life,
Life of hope and simple joys.
You always guided me,
Like the North Star,
You still guide me,
My dear,
My love.
You shaped how I lived,
Kept me safe,
Kept me alive,
Kept me away from the drugs
And the alcohol.
You saved me,
And I betrayed thee.
I betrayed you once, twice, thrice,
My dear, my love,
I betrayed you and lost our Life;
But what hurt the most is that I lost
You.
False
Submitted by MrCool27 on January 29, 2008 - 13:44.False
By Dustin Finer
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Stretch out of bed. Into the shower, half asleep. Comb hair, brush teeth, wash face. Deodorant. Cereal with steely spoon and icy milk. Yellow monster gobbles children and spits us back out at: that place.
Imitations
Submitted by Gigi1810 on January 29, 2008 - 13:40.Imitations
By Gianna Carchia
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Mini skirts
Bright shirts
Tight jeans
Beauty queen
Ugg boots
Look cute
High heels
How nice it feels
To be like everyone else
I’m not like that
But hard I’ll try
To always laugh
And never cry
Pretend to be
What I’m not
To try and prove
I can be ‘hot’
Imitations
Produce limitations
Role Model
Submitted by andrea on January 29, 2008 - 09:42.Role Model
By Andrea Bizon
Mount Saint Joseph Academy, Grade 9
Someone you look up to
Someone who will always be there
A person who cares about you
And help you with whatever, anywhere
A true friend to the heart
Even if they don’t know it
A person who cheers you on
And helps you when you show it
A true role model will always be there
No one can replace them

Follower
Submitted by greenie on January 28, 2008 - 19:50.Follower
By Misha Kydd
Mount Mansfield Union High School, Grade 9
Don't frown at me,
Don't sweep me aside,
Tired of my clinging,
Of my clutching hands.
Don't toss me to the ocean
Of hungering fish,
Don't fling me back
To be devoured.
Don't laugh at me,
Following in your footsteps,
Echoing your moves,
Mirroring your dance.
You somehow got it right,
You got the formula
Fake It
Submitted by smsmtecklare on January 28, 2008 - 13:41.Fake It
By Isabel Larrow
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8
Sometimes in life
You just have to fake it
It confusing and strange
You just have to take it
Force on a smile
Fake a small laugh
Until you find
A clear paved path
Find out who you are
And who you want to be
Until just then
You have to flee
Imagine, pretend
While life is in the making
You just have to keep
R.O.L.E. M.O.D.E.L.
Submitted by smsmtecklare on January 28, 2008 - 13:36.R.O.L.E. M.O.D.E.L.
By Eli Millman
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8
Re-live someone’s life
Or rock your own world!
Look to find yourself
‘Empty’ should be the shoes you choose to walk in.
Make your own decisions,
Own your own dreams,
Dance to the beat of your drums,
Everyone has something special within,
Love yourself for who you are going to be,
My Dad
Submitted by amyd121 on January 28, 2008 - 13:20.On the Four Wheeler
By Jarett Preston Legg
Ferrisburgh Central School, Grade 3
On the four wheeler
My dad rides, he
Does donuts and
Speeds as if he
Was on a race
Track, the
Wind blows in
His hair like
Waves in the
Ocean, his
Cheeks are red
Like a red stripe
On the U.S flag
He rides until,
My mom calls
Us in for
Dinner, but after
We go back
Outside and start
My Role Model, My Dad
Submitted by amyd121 on January 28, 2008 - 13:12.My Role Model, My Dad
By Max Bicknell
Ferrisburgh Central School, Grade 3
In the office
At his desk
He fills out
His birch like papers
One after another
With a rock hard pen.
As he pushes his pen
Across papers and prescriptions
He thinks,
“I am only doing this to save lives.”
He looks up at the clock,
It’s time to go home
He Gets in his car,
Hunting with Dad
Submitted by amyd121 on January 28, 2008 - 12:44.Hunting with Dad
By Alexandria Brace
Ferrisburgh Central School, Grade 3
In the field
He sets up the blinds
The color of dried leaves
He covers the blinds
With old corn husks,
He lies in the disguised blind
Pulls down the cover
Then waits…
Sees geese!
He gets his shotgun,
How I love it So
Submitted by smsmtecklare on January 28, 2008 - 10:34.How I Love it So
By Stefanie Baker
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8
My sister looks up to me,
I don’t know why.
My sister looks up to me,
Like she does a bird in the sky.
My sister looks up to me,
She copies everything I do.
My sister looks up to me,
Like the way I tie my shoe.
My sister looks up to me,
I try not to let it show.
My sister looks up to me,
Lying Love
Submitted by labarret01 on January 25, 2008 - 13:35.Lying Love
By Tegan LaBarre
Lebanon High School, Grade 12
My eyes hold the trusting gaze of yours.
You search for an emotion that has no existence in me.
You deserve to be loved, to have this touch mean something,
But the truth is, in my heart there is no you.
I feel nothing when I see you.
You say your heart flutters for me, pounds through your chest.
Mine lays still.
One Leads to Another
Submitted by BCole8190 on January 25, 2008 - 13:30.One Leads to Another
By Brenda Cole
Lebanon High School, Grade 12
It starts out as one,
a small one that doesn’t really matter.
Until I keep doing it
and soon that’s all I want to do.
I lie to myself, I lie to everyone else.
Does this make me feel good?
I feel guilty, there’s doubt in my mind.
Should I be honest, or should I keep going with it?
Puce Isn't Much Better
Submitted by Sweet Mother of... on January 25, 2008 - 10:03.Puce Isn't Much Better
By Sara Archie
Lebanon High School, Grade 12
Dear Me,
That is one ugly top.
The colors make me sick
That shade of yellow makes you
look Jaundiced
Those polka dots are bloated
The seams are ripped on the sleeve
The top must have shrunk in the wash
And
That silhouette is so last year.
For all of love that is good:
NEVER wear that thing AGAIN.
But for now I'll just say you look
Chic
Fabulous
and Cute
Because if I told the truth
You'd disagree with me
Anyway.

Excuses Never Work
Submitted by pineapple_babbit on January 24, 2008 - 11:33.Excuses Never Work
By Emily Patch
Rutland High School, Grade 11
“Do you have you homework?” the teacher asked in an aggravated voice.
“Um… My homework?” I repeated trying to take up some time so I could come up with a story.
“Yes, your homework. Do you have it or do you not?”
“Well, you see, I did my homework, but,” I started my story. “I went to my grandma’s house and decided to do my homework at the picnic table.”
“Don’t tell me that it got blown off by the wind.”
“No… My grandma went to the store to get some food for the goat. The goat was so hungry that it chewed through the fencing and got out.”
“And then it ate your homework?”
“No. The fence was electric fencing and it touched the wood. After a while, the wood got so hot that it caught the goat house caught on fire. The picnic table was right near the fire so…”
“So your homework caught on fire?” she asked uninterested.

Fake
Submitted by ALPink06 on January 24, 2008 - 08:46.Fake
By Alison Lussier
Benson Village School, Grade 8
You made me think it was true.
I thought it was real.
You proved me wrong.
The emotions I felt were real.
Yours weren’t.
I fell for you like no other.
The way you made me feel,
It was like a dream come true,
But then lost.
You said you were over her.
What a lie!
You have no idea how I felt.

Flawed Reflection
Submitted by megdempsey on January 19, 2008 - 20:42.Flawed Reflection
By Meghann Dempsey
Rice Memorial High School, Grade 9
Who's that in the reflection staring back?
Surely not me
No, of course not!
That is the face of a liar and coward
Those sagging eyes are not my own
My eyes are bright and send my love
The mirror shows sockets of hateful and judging gazes
They do not belong on my pure face
my mom
Submitted by Mac and Gunner on January 18, 2008 - 11:45.My Mom
By Mary Sniatkowski
Dover Elementary School, Grade 5
Everybody looks up to some one in life. Maybe it's a TV star or sports star, but it my eyes your best role model is someone close to you.
My role model is my mom. She owns a movie theater called the Mountain Park Cinema. She is very good at designing clothes. She is very encouraging in everything I do.
What It Takes
Submitted by Gazebo on January 10, 2008 - 20:12.What it Takes
By W. T. Smith
Hanover High School, Grade 11
When you can say "I love you all," and still know where you stand,
When you can bear your people through, and still protect the land,
When you can't watch a good man fall and not reach out a hand,
Then maybe I will suffer you--
Just try to understand.
When you can be at peace with both your self and fellow man,
When you can turn the other cheek and worry for his hand,
When you can give all you have and still make no demand,
Then, perhaps, will I look up,
And watch the way you stand.
When you can keep your promises and never speak a lie,
When you can answer questions as you look me in the eye,
When you can bear the weight of all the world without a sigh,
Then, perhaps, I'll hear you out,
If you can tell me why.
And when you can still be human, be you hated or adored,
And when can you never let yourself be silenced or ignored,
And when you can not be glorious; stay humble, in a word;
On that day will I follow you--
For you will be my lord.
Take it From Me
Submitted by toodlesnoodles on January 10, 2008 - 18:31.Take it From Me
By Lindsey LeBeau
Rice Memorial High School, Grade 9
8:10.
It smelled as if something had died in the room;
I did all I could to keep from throwing up.
All I could hear – the sound of scribbling pencils
There was not one person in the room, besides me, who was not writing.
I felt like an idiot.
8:30.
Role Model
Submitted by Guest on January 9, 2008 - 09:14.Role Model
By Colin Owen
Dummerston School, Grade 8
Ordinary
Submitted by vtsmith on January 8, 2008 - 08:20.Ordinary
By Laurel Whitney
Crossett Brook Middle School, Grade 8
If you were searching in my closet you would find shirts, pants, jeans, skirts, sweaters, tunics, jewelry, pictures, t-shirts, sweatshirts, shoes, slippers, purses -- all the essentials of a girl’s closet. But if you look deeper you would find a couple of very odd and special things.
My Role Model
Submitted by mlaforce57 on December 10, 2007 - 10:49.My Role Model
By Morgan LaForce
Westford School, Grade 7
He’s strong
He's wise
He's no longer here not in person
But in my heart he's still alive
He's in my dreams and nightmares

