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Raven Haired Girl

Submitted by Schila on May 12, 2008 - 20:29.

Chorus:
The Raven haired girl
who lives down the street.
Don't know where she's goin'
Or who she'll meet.

But the raven haired girl,
with the stars in her eyes...
(any sugestions for the rest of the stanza?
I don't know what to put.)

Verse 1
(still creating :)

Bridge
She sees all
In the corner of her eyes,
The thriving of a nation,
or someone's quick demise.
So don't second guess her.
cause the whole
truth lies,
in her eyes.

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