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Workshops -- Sat Feb. 4, 10 a.m. to 2 p.m.

Don't Miss These Workshops -- SATURDAY, FEB. 4, 10 a.m. to 2 p.m. YWP in Winooski. PLEASE SIGN UP BELOW. WE NEED TO KNOW IF YOU ARE COMING! Thanks

 

10 a.m. -- NOON:  Creating a Photo Story -- Images, text and sound. Photographer Selena Salfen (brilliant environmental portrait photographer) and YWP Director and Writer, Geoffrey Gevalt (gg) BRING a compelling photo of someone you want to write about -- an elder relative preferably.

This workshop will feature tips on taking good portrait photographs -- techniques, samples and interactive photo taking. This will be followed by a podcasting mini-workshop with GG including how to use direct-record and Audacity. You will upload  a photo, write a short story, narrate it and upload your podcast for a finished photo story!

Noon -- 2p.m.: Jazz Poetry with Reuben Jackson. Reuben is a poet, former Jazz archivist for the Smithsonian and BHS teacher being featured this year on The Story (NPR). For those of you who've seen Reuben in action or have read his poetry or received his mentoring or been to one of his workshops, this is not to be missed.

Students can stay afterward to work on their poems or podcasts. HOWEVER, the building will be locked at 2 p.m. so anyone coming for pick up will have to call 324-9537 to be let in.

YOU MUST SIGN UP ahead of time below in comments, or give GG a call at 324-9537. THANKS. We are hoping for a great turnout for the first workshops of 2012.

Donations accepted.


 

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Newspaper Index 2011-12: Jan. 23-28

 

Each week, YWP publishes your best work with our media partners: Rutland Herald  and vpr.net (Monday); Times Argus  and The Valley News (Tuesday); St. Albans Messenger (Wednesday); Addison Independent, Colchester Sun, Essex Reporter, Stowe Reporter and Waterbury Record (Thursday); Brattleboro Reformer and the Hometown section of the Burlington Free Press (Saturday); Rural Route Today (every other Wednesday) and the Charlotte News. Support your local newspapers! Buy 'em! Support VPR, listen!

Week of Jan. 23:  Click here to READ THIS WEEK'S SELECTIONS or click Writing on Writing, Under the Bed and General Writing to read all recent submissions.  To view or download the pages below as pdf files, click the newspaper's name in the attachments below.

To view last week's Newspaper Series index, click here.

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Saving Cinderella -- The Animated Movie

Folks. Please check out this amazing animated movie created by students of Daniel Houghton at Middlebury College. For those who don't know Daniel, he was a most wonderful leader/coach/mentor for the China Project -- a 2007 performing voyage by members of the Vermont Youth Orchestra throughout China. He helped produce a live blog, a magazine article, a radio series and a public television piece.

This time, he used the inspiring story, Saving Cinderella by one of this site's finest writers, Rebecca_V as material for his animation class to make this creation. Look, enjoy and read Rebecca's story linked above. AND LET US KNOW what you think in the comment section below. Bravo to all, I say!

 

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Balloons

 

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You see these balloons.

They’re going up to you.

To show you that I still think of you.

You are a part of me.

I’ll hold on forever.

 

I am sending you the colors of the rainbow.

To show you the joy you brought me.

I’m giving it back.

I’ve had it too long.

The only thing I need now is you.

 

Your hands in mine.

Your eyes.

Reaching into my soul.

I can remember you singing.

Your gentle song a lullaby.

You see these balloons.

Every year they go up.

So you’ll never feel alone.

And we’ll always be together.

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Mystical Creatures

 

 

Mermaids splash and sing their song

While elves tinker with gold

Giants raid and roam along

While fauns dance, young and old

 

Unicorns prance so merrily

Fairies flit to and fro

Dragons swoop so carelessly

While gnomes make flowers grow


 

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Forever

 
Forever.
What a stupid word.
Because honestly, what is forever?
I see you try to answer me.
You can’t.
 
You might say that fossils have lasted for billions and billions of years.
But even as we speak, they are burned,
to satisfy an instant need.
 
Sarcophaguses, and pyramids,
whose ancient splendor bedecked the deserts, you say.
They lasted forever.
They still stand, surrounded by the hot sun and sand, refusing to crumble.
But I counter,
Saying robbers and petty thieves have stripped them of their finery.
Their marble, their golden tops.
Hell, even the pharaohs themselves no longer reside there—
They live in museums, where confused children press their noses against the glass.
 
Searching your mind, you might bring up mankind,
how we have survived everything thrown at us.
But I say, what is mankind?
We are feeble, dying off everyday,
from our own stupid decisions, and those of others
And even if they don’t die (though they always do),
humans are too easily broken.
One might think that a human might be made from stronger stuff,
But no.
We are fragile as a butterfly wing, as snowflakes, as glass.
 
I strengthen my argument by telling you that I, I am broken.
You look at me apprehensively.
I don’t look broken.
I’m pretty enough, I guess,
Good grades, I’m not sick or in a cast.
But I shake my head.
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Reflection

Reflection

Ladies and Gentlemen, this is your first art prompt. People got back to me saying they were interested in doing this, so here you are. This is "Reflection" by paperdragon1967. Write a poem, a song, give this girl a story. Thanks for your enthusiasm, everyone.

Fair sailing,

-Circe

 

 

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OMG Where's the 6-word story?

It moved.

It morphed.

It now is the 255-character story.

And it resides above, on the tab called SHOUTS, as in shout-out your 255-characterstoryallinonebreathifyoucandoit.

Just joking.

It's a new idea: Try creating stories that are 255-characters long. Why 255? I don't know. I really don't. If you find that too short we can lengthen it, a little.

TRY IT OUT: youngwritersproject.org/shoutbox

 

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Dad,

Dad I figured it all out, I think. I know what I want.  You won't like all the places I want to go, probably. A summer in Texas, a winter in Lausanne, another in Minneapolis or Saint Paul. A spring taking care of children in Capetown. Another taking care of artifacts in Washington.

I'll spend my autumns at home though. I'll always spend my autumns at home. 

You won't like, either, the way I don't want to change the world, just my space in it. I want to learn fluent French because it is where I come from. I want to dress in men's shirts and buy myself a small forest green pickup and buy all my furniture at Goodwill, furnish a small house with only half a bathroom and unfinished walls and floors that I have to wallpaper and cover with art. I want a loft that I can fill with stars if I open the window, and a bed full of quilts because it is cold as hell iced over in the winter. And I want a garden in the spring, that I made by myself, with a walkway I paved over by hand. 

I don't want to be ambassador to Italy or Russia or Israel anymore, Dad. Or some sort of big whig editor or some sort of beautiful business woman with a sharp tongue. I want a blue collar job, maybe to bartend at the local pub on weeknights and write for the Herald by the article. I want to know what it's like to be tired at the end of the day, everyday, and wake up each morning and still feel it. 

And most of all, I want to save up my money and buy myself a little bookshop on Main Street in downtown Somewhere. I want something quiet with good coffee. I want you to visit me and whoever I find to keep my company along the way, and come and see the little children we'll have and the way they'll look just like you. I want you to love me even though I want something old-fashioned and simple and full of just books and tulips that come back each year. 

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Solitaire

 

Somewhere out along the lines

of universe and curves of time

amidst dusty scattered skulls and spines

I seem to have lost a friend of mine.

 

I dropped her at her destination

(she'd long been bound for other nations)

but by our arranged visitation,

she was not done with exploration.

 

the first sister I could have kept—

when we parted ways, I think she wept.

But by her choice, as New England slept

she left, to freer lives accept.

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Am I?

Am I pretty?
All my friends say, "Totally!"

Am I sexy?
Cosmopolitan says, "Hell yes".

Am I smart?

My teachers tell my parents, "Very intelligent."

Am I boring?

My boyfriend says, "Never." 

 

Am I pretty?

I say I'm average.

Am I sexy?

I try, but I swear my boyfriend's exaggerating.

Am I smart?

I have the basics I suppose.

Am I boring?

I'm not as adventurous as those other girls...

 

Am I insecure? 

I'll admit that.

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they used to dance

 

for so long the words would

tango,

waltz,

pirouette

straight from my mind

through my fingers

excitedly

onto the paper

barely contained

by those parallel blue lines.

 

now the words stumble.

confused, they have trouble

even walking now,

let alone grapevine.

 

I imagine them getting lost

within me.

bumping against the walls of

my head,

my chest,

like the lights are turned off,

but they aren’t.

 

when they do find their way

through that labyrinth

that maze

they emerge as alphabet soup

jargon

completely and utterly

wrong.

 

I’ve tried to close

my eyes and reach

inside,

tried to pull off their

blindfolds

and push them,

shove them,

drag the words

with my pointer finger

in the right direction.

but they don’t seem to

respond.

 

maybe I should try

dance lessons.

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Missing Information

Firefox error message apologizes:
Well this is embarrassing
 
Tells me it can't
take me where
I need to go
 
That little red kit
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